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Title	Who is Doing What to Whom: Narration as a Revision Strategy
Contact	mailto:nctcimages@fws.gov
Producer	USFWS/NCTC
Description	CW/CT Webinar series. Presented by Dr. Michelle Baker. September 17, 2009. Smart revision is no easy task. Trouble spots are simple to find, but tough to correct. Far too often, we toss whole paragraphs, rewrite from scratch, and end up with just as many problems as before. If you’re ready to stop reinventing the wheel, one simple question to ask is, “who is doing what to whom?” The answer reveals subjects, verbs, and objects that magically fall into place as coherent sentences in logically ordered paragraphs. This webinar in NCTC’s ongoing series for Critical Writers / Critical Thinkers will help you to identify draft material that can benefit from revision. You’ll learn how to ask and answer simple questions that yield helpful clues to sentence and paragraph structure. Finally, you’ll practice putting these structures into place, clarifying your own writing as well as the work of others. Best of all, you’ll save time and energy as you learn to revise more efficiently. Objectives—At the completion of this webinar you will be able to: -Identify sentences and paragraphs that could benefit from revision. -Answer the question, “who is doing what to whom?” Put the answer into subject, verb, object positions to create coherent sentences.
FWS Resource Links	http://nctc.fws.gov/topic/online-training/webinars/cw-ct.html#wid
Subject	videography webinar writing
Publisher	U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service
Contributors	USFWS/NCTC
Date Published	2011-04-04
Type	Video
Format	H264
Item ID	888827715001
Source	NCTC Image Library
Language	English
Rights	Public Domain
Audience	General
Original Format	Digital
Length	01:01:02
Collection	Critical Writing/Critical Thinking; Webinars
Presenter	Presented by Dr. Michelle Baker.
Transcript	Transcript located here: http://nctc.fws.gov/topic/online-training/webinars/documents/cw-ct/09_17_09/transcriptn.pdf
Video Player Link	https://fws.rev.vbrick.com/#/videos/6d1ac54a-74fb-4176-8264-64ee2461e008
Archival file	Volume18/1909.url
Date created	2013-02-22
Date modified	2017-12-29